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I don't get it. Chap 1 page 4 by *Pikku-apina:iconPikku-apina:


©2009 *Pikku-apina
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:star: Be sure about that you read this or else....!!! :pissed: :star:
Story: :iconearwenmcr: !!!
Art work: me!
conversations: Me and EarwenMCR
Orginal story: [link]
Previous page:[link]
Fullview is most
I don't have anymore Marker pens. Why? Because my school ends that's why! :lol:
But, but.... This Doujinshi's style don't look same anymore... Hope you still like it :pray:
And Critiques are always welcome. :meow:
I wanna know what I do wrong and what I could make better. ^_____^
So help me and tell me what is shity and tell me how I can make it look better :heart:
:star: Thank you for the reading :heart: :star:

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:icongreenwombat:
Awww, voi Kakashi... XDD
Ja Iruka näyttää ihan supersö;pöltä tuossa toisessa kuvassa, minä pidän ja paljon *w*
:iconkakashi-kati:
aaawwww
that page is sooo cooool :love:
especially kakashi: you sound like my mother
soo amazing *looool* xD

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*~ side by side or miles apart, friends are forever close to your heart ~*

~~fighting for peace is like f*cking for virginity~~
:iconearwenmcr:
LOL, the whole page is great! Iruka's pouty/sad face is just the best and poor Kakashi! xD

But... Isn't it supposed to be 'Bla bla Bla' instead of ';pla pla pla'? And did I accidentaly write ideot instead of idiot in the correction? I'm so sorry!
:iconkawaiikiui:
nice lol

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I'm sugar n spice and I'll kick your butt twice

Sugar n Spice I'll kick your A** TWICE!

Yes yes I'm sugar n spice...DONT MAKE ME KICK IT TWICE!

NOW BEAT IT!

Member...I'm sugar n spice and of course everything nice! :heart:
:icongaurdian-of-dreamers:
Mean Kakashi! Iruka's just worried!:(
Everything is great, just the hands are still a little too big, but if you practice with your own hand you'll get the hang of it!:D

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Smile-
think of somethimg beautiful,-
perhaps an apple tree in bloom;
on white winter night-
a touch of your mother's hand
on your hair when you were little;
or a sweet moment of love.

Look trustingly to heaven
and say, "Life is beautiful."
:iconfrosteeflakes:
Why's Kakashi got to be so mean for?! Iruka's just concerned about his safety! *grumble* lol

Cute story -- I can't wait for the next page! :D

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When in Rome... Turn left!
:iconfma-luvr:
Tää on herttaista! C: Joo, ainoa adjektiivi minkä osaan XD Jess. Hienosti piirretty ja kaikkee :heart:

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because it's pretty hard to breathe under water
:iconvanna6yaoiheaven:
oh wow... this is too cute. So cool and funny and I reeeally wanna' see more of this XDD

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A non-people-person in a room full of people...? Has the world gone MAD???!

S.N.I.L.LCLUB:[link]
:iconpikku-apina:
Thanks XD

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....Where am I?
...Who am I?
......Who are YOU!?

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